Skip to main content

Search This Blog

Joline Marshall

Mama crazy af

Get link
Facebook
Twitter
Pinterest
Email
Other Apps

September 17, 2021

Mama crazy af

wtf

132 Likes 11 Comments

Hamid Zahir

Brian Mackenzie

sounds like the start to a brilliant plot to either a thriller or horror or both. try and mix up the 3rd person with more surrounding context... I wouldnt mind reading something like this.

Keshab Bhatta

Where’s the lamb sauce?

Ana Ruiz

What the fuck is going on here

Thet Myat

The fridge is a huge let down

Apple Gabriel Cabading

Loved it!

Ingrid Viaene

Just by the picture and the first line, I thought the twist was going to be that the mother is the fridge and her babies are ice cubes or something.

De Guzman Dyan

The last line kinda deflates the entire story. You start off with an intriguing atmosphere, giving hints and all but then it abruptly ends with the statement "Mama closes the fridge door." Maybe, flesh it out a little more? add a bit more detail to the ending, instead of that statement?

Laura

Mama should have gotten an abortion to prevent this drivel.

Melanie Timothy

Are the babies kiwis?

David A. Nugent

Do it again.

Lou Olmos

Wtf is this drivel?

Get link
Facebook
Twitter
Pinterest
Email
Other Apps

Comments

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Here's mine

Here's mine gaming 158 Likes 19 Comments Reina DE Sur Divina Klaassen Silent hill 2 Portal Shadow of the colossus Bloodborne Arkham city Mass effect 2 Nier automata Telltale's the walking dead Borderlands 2 Doom (2016) Uncharted 4 The witcher 3 Sminer Codef Anno 1602/1404/1800, Bioshock, X-Com, C&C Red Alert, Black & White (currently making a game with similar but improved gameplay for fun)

„Fuck the Goo Goo Dolls, they look like the dogs that hang out at the mall“

September 18, 2022

„Fuck the Goo Goo Dolls, they look like the dogs that hang out at the mall“ music 128 Likes 1 Comments Taylor Bryant Usman Jehan Scary.

Powered by Blogger

Theme images by Michael Elkan

Agnes Davis

Archive

September 20223
August 20225
July 20223
January 20221
December 20215
September 202115
August 202123
July 202127
June 202132
May 202130

April 202125
March 20216

Show more Show less

Report Abuse